at dawn I watch the clouds draw near
a bright shard of serenity
fractures deeply
as the aura of the must encumbers me
wandering on the fringe
in a world of magnets and apathy
reflections dim
as I walk towards this kid
a brisk look in his eyes
a wide smile
a promising feeling
penetrated and yet shocked I grow beyond
the path of pre-awareness
in a land
where denial
is a sanctuary from shock
I twist as contradictory feelings ignite
a phase of clarity
gripping
on the emotional and intellectual
state
sets me ready
to continue my journey
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Just close your eyes for a second and you might hear it all.
I give full permission for ~ Monolith-Verses to submit my poetry on the site
"I twist as contradictory feelings ignite
a phase of clarity
gripping
on the emotional and intellectual
state
sets me ready
to continue my journey"
some of the line breaks here seem a bit unneccessary. Also, "gripping/on the emotional and intellectual/state/sets me ready/to continue my journey" reads a bit off because I'm not sure what sets you ready. This could be remedied by using commas:
"I twist as contradictory feelings ignite
a phase of clarity,
gripping on the emotional and intellectual state,
sets me ready
to continue my journey"
But that's just my suggestion
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Your musky lips, cramping smoke into halos,
love to finger obscenities and slander. I am a bitch now.
Don’t touch her now, this thing of waste. She’s
Empty. She’s full of spite.
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