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Fall of Man - Part 3 by ~neocon:iconneocon:



living in denial robs us
of peace of mind


a vision of no return twinkles
deep inside me
as conscience sinks within
the nagging truth


reality seems like an uphill walk
not far away
tinted by haze and mist
unlikely praised to be a king


of all living
perceptions


and so anger keeps leaking in
similar to a substance
of hopefulness and hopelesness
ugly and unprofitable
disguised
in a tool of truth
so powerful and forceful
that guides us down the deep paths
of cynicism and misanthropy
I cannot see

but

I know
punishment is remedy
to those who bear to cross the line
and I do
©2005-2009 ~neocon
:iconneocon:

Author's Comments

3. Anger is on queue at this particular time.It is divided in hopeful and hopeless anger.Both of them have their advantanges and disadvantages as well.Hopeful anger can be a driving force so powerful and rough that can keeps us working hard for years.Although it is hard on our personalities, often turning us cynical or giving up hope.On the other hand hopeless anger allows many to consider human extinction for the first time however without love and warmth.When we fully accept the situation, anger dies and we proceed to the next stage which is acceptance.

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Good use of stanza breaks in this one, it really leads the reader down the piece and helps us follow your train of thought. =)

--
Your musky lips, cramping smoke into halos,
love to finger obscenities and slander. I am a bitch now.
Don’t touch her now, this thing of waste. She’s
Empty. She’s full of spite.

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