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Fall of Man - Part 5 by ~neocon:iconneocon:



and so


I strive forward in the clouds of vehemence
in a dynamic balance
of optimism and pessimism
crippled by a nightmare that once
reigned over me


don't cow nor shrink back
just accept it
humans are hopeless as a species


once we reach
the realization of the Fall of Man
there is renewed hope
for the survival of the planet
as a life form


and I know

we've reached the point of no return

apparently forgetting
how to stay alive in this system of life
and so
I walk ahead
in a balanced consciousness
knowing that
all life
deserves respect
©2005-2009 ~neocon
:iconneocon:

Author's Comments

5. Moving forward in a balance of optimism and pessimism sets us ready to face our responsibilities.Accepting that humans are hopeless we eventually build hope for the survival of the planet as a life form.Meaning that a balanced awareness can only simplify our efforts to preserve life on earth by meeting with more success.

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mmmm... good thoughts... (doom doom doom) but perhaps a little more showing? I know that in something like this, it'd be hard to do, but it's worth trying. I think I'll read another one of the parts to get a more complete feeling =)

--
Your musky lips, cramping smoke into halos,
love to finger obscenities and slander. I am a bitch now.
Don’t touch her now, this thing of waste. She’s
Empty. She’s full of spite.

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