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In Spite of You

I'll lay down in this field,with my eyes closed waiting for me.Beyond this prospect,i'll bundle myself all up in the air,and fly along.There's this distance unfolding gleefuly,dripping.A badge of dignity,glows in dark water.Overall,veiled allusions are flattering around.All i can see,is me digging up this tomb.Glaring at the spot,misfiring.On the far side of,i'm still coiling in this miracle,trying to forget and piece up a single particle.Consider it expunged.Dry it,i'm on demand.In spite of you,we live and die,i'll cut this out and fly. (ending)
It's been a quite long time,since i last submitted something over here.So i'll just drop another poem of mine,it seems to be pretty intrinsic after all.Be free to read through.Thanks
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LovelyJadedLoner Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2004
Great visions... I like the lines
*A badge of dignity,glows in dark water.Overall,veiled allusions are flattering around.

It just flows so wonderfully. Great word usage.
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pixiesrgroovay Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2004   Photographer
you never cease to amaze me in your fluency with words
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neocon Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2004   Writer
I'm so glad you like it,there's nothing else to say than a huge thanks :-) this is my so called contribution over here,and it's so damn hip that i can keep you up speechless.Lol! :D ;-)
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DistortedEternity Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2004
very good!
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